Today’s task is one of perspectives… “A man and a woman walk through the park together, holding hands. They pass an old woman sitting on a bench. The old woman is knitting a small, red sweater. The man begins to cry. Write this scene from three different points of view.”

I’ve answered this with three separate stories of flash fiction, which also sit together as a whole…



His hand shuddered upon her touch.

Seeing red was his daily hell.

For the last time, she knitted.

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  1. 25th September 2014 / 6:16 pm

    Well done!

  2. 25th September 2014 / 6:52 pm

    Interesting take on the prompt!

  3. Andrey Lychik
    25th September 2014 / 9:17 pm

    Wow, all three of those short phrases instilled images with their own stories that need to be told.

  4. 25th September 2014 / 9:33 pm

    You have left me with three more prompts to keep my imagination ticking over … thanks

  5. 26th September 2014 / 3:47 am

    You just blew my mind!! this is an amazing take on this prompt!!

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