How to say goodbye.

 

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How to say goodbye.

The air moved a vacuum of sound.

With a blunt breath and eyes on the ground,

the mortal invaded,

through sunlight he waded

and silence was heard all the way down.

36 Comments

  1. 8th September 2015 / 4:37 pm

    A beautifully written limerick! As others have said, it’s nice to read one that’s not intended to be silly. 🙂

    • 14th September 2015 / 12:33 pm

      Thank you! It’s nice to experiment, although I do love a silly Limerick too 🙂

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